mmsantoyo Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 Friends think I'm crazy but I can't pass up those deals Black Friday is here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mysticmage Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 Black Friday is near Endless crowds jump, cheer, laugh While I am in line Pretty bad, but it will due. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFAddict716 Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 Waiting in the cold Hour after hour for a good deal Oh, the money saved! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amberjobryant Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 favorite time of year freezing lines but full of cheer bargins to be found Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nijireiki Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 (edited) In line for pricematchBought my stuff a week ago--Ha! Who's laughing now?! Slept all day Thursday,Yawning in the minivanthe kids are here to block O Blackest of Days!Your cups overflow with sales onMoste generous gifts Night vision goggles,maps of the building, butit's no spy movie... Wearing my old padsfrom football's not cheating, it'sevening the odds. Economy's bad,Reselling the deals I get,Cash to pay the bills. Alternatively... Economy's bad,Gifts ahead of time '07,No BF this year. Third variant... Economy's bad,Getting the best deals 'cause we'rePinching our pennies! Keep the car running, we've got a lot of places to hit before 6. Circling the lines,"Limit one per customer";There are six of us... Bobsledding with cartsPlowing our way through the crowds,No rainchecks today Gold, frankincense, myrrh--Wouldn't you prefer a Wii?(I've got it like that.) Practicing tacklesand agility training--an Olympic Sport. This year I'm gettinga Blu Ray even ifI have to kill you. Deck the halls with adsand coupons! Fa la la la, Black Friday is here! Stocking up for threeteenagers, DS Lites areon my shopping list I'm a Mac and I'ma PC this year! Savingsfrom Best Buy camping. Iron Man, Batman,could there be more toys?! (They'refor dad, not li'l boys) .....argh. This last one was particularly awkward. I hate using "li'l" as a legitimate word, but there you have it. I wanted to express the plight of girls and women everywhere with the one grown man everyone has in their family who wants all the little boy's toys. My family deals with my father with a kind of judgemental ironic weariness, because we have no brothers/sons for him to pretend he's buying action figures for, and thus this poem with a really nifty improvised rhyme scheme! I am proud of it despite its weaknesses. I also think that snegrif's haiku deserves a nod of appreciation, and I have responded with my own haiku: You may be there first,but my kung-fu is better!Accept challenge? Y/N The syllable count is dependent on choosing one of the options, and not reading both out loud. Curse my shaky interpretation of east-Asian poetry forms!! HUMILIATION Edited October 7, 2008 by nijireiki Edited for punctuation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skytrain Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 Gottadeal is great Ads seen early, cannot wait We won’t show up late Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PunkRocker101 Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 Thanksgiving Meal Done Black Friday here we all come Can’t Wait for the fun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saiynee Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 Preparing for weeks In search of the greatest deals All for my kid's smiles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nijireiki Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 frugality's away of life; it takes skills anda.m. sacifice. no warm bed for menor hours of rest, when talkingshopping, i'm the best when electronicsshopping, watch out for productswith obsolescence. drowning sorrows incold gravy soaked turkey legs'cause i was too late scheduled to work fri;it should be holiday pay!man, i'm missing out. filling out these formsbut my time is better spenttrolling GottaDeal... don't care who wins thepresidential election;too busy planning! float like a butter-fly, sting like a bee, alican't shop better'n me(NOTE: ugh, ugh, I hate these fake words, oh my god.) these deals almost makeme wish I liked my fam'ly,THEY DON'T DESERVE ME (NOTE: okay, this... isn't as bad, because I actually say family with 2 syllables usually. no, it's still terrible.) the pecan pie isgrowing cold, the turkey'sgone; it's time to go. My job is really boring, guys. I am still at work. Oh, it is so boring. ...Man I hope my boss doesn't catch me. The IT guys probably think this is hilarious. Hi IT guys!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grassy Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 Up Way Too Early Most People Don't Understand It's An Addiction Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nijireiki Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 stingy scrooge's purse, almost as full as before he found b.f. deals! the grinch's heart was 2 sizes too small for the black friday shopping. Yup, there's a few more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grassy Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 Hold On, I want that! No Crazy!, I got it first! Fine! - Broken Anyway! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nijireiki Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 no i'm not getting a gift for the dog!! ...okay, let me see the ad... 4 bucks a gallon?! online black friday this year, gas too expensive. Okay, that's the last of them, I think. WHY AM I BLAZING WITH POETRY? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brynnfromtheblock Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 Thanksgiving meal done.. Settle in for the long wait... First in line again!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jenesparza Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 Scoping out the ads Not a minute can be lost Ready to shop fast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kellane26 Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 Crisp air, falling leaves A sign of things sure to come Ads, Sales, Deals galore Ads in hand, let's go! Lines, tickets & bills, oh my! The season is here! Black Friday's coming. Buy one get one free? No thanks. I'm saving myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dealluvr Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 (edited) waking up early hurry to store of your choice buy all the good stuff stay up all night long go get coffee and bagel go to people watch:D really cold outside dont really want to go out save money and sleep Edited October 7, 2008 by dealluvr add Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jcarr492 Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 Take me to the stores I want to find my bargains Will you come with me? I can take you out I'll run you down with my cart You can't outrun me! I love to pricematch They love to pricematch for me All my ads in hand. You and me camping Trying to keep warm and dry Best Buy nights are long. What a holiday! Black Friday is a great day! Spend! Spend! Spend! Spend! Spend! Long lines, sleepy eyes yawns, cat naps, sleepless people Then its rush, rush, rush! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mmsantoyo Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 The turkey is gone made my list and checked it twice thanks to gottadeal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mmsantoyo Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 You just can't beat them GottaDeal is number one for Black Friday deals Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PinkPrincess515 Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 Counting Down The Days Staying Awake All Night Long Run For Doorbusters Waiting For Brads Ads A Holiday Tradition Making Wake Up Calls Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JenT1292 Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 I'll make a long list To save with the crazy deals Thanks to GottaDeal! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piggywigums Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 Anticipation I shudder with the knowledge doors will open soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leg824 Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 Gotta call in sick Sales are number one today Black Friday I love Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
racerfan Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 Freezing my butt off Hot chocolate in my hand All to save a buck Open please open I just have to get inside Hope to score a deal Down this aisle quick Can't believe I got it all Man check out the line My trunk is loaded Time to head home and get sleep Hubby can unpack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jcarr492 Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 Laptop, camera, Digital frame, toys, and more. These are what I want. On Thanksgiving Day, We'll be rummaging through ads. The excitement grows. Excited, anxious, a feeling of happiness. Bring on Black Friday! More competition... Gottadeal is the place you want to find deals! Bring me liberty... and let me shop til I drop. Or give me death. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiivaa Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 need a work excuse will Best Buy write me a note? im sick of high costs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess7915 Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 Tickets are all gone Standing in line all night long Best Buy sucks so bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess7915 Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 Hurry eat your meals Black Friday shopping I go I gotta get deals!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emptynest-2 Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 I'm not a poet and I know it. But here is goes; Black Friday is near Bargains & gifts for my Dears GD got in gear Love shoppin’ BF Chair, Food, Family & Friends GottaDeal once again Hours skimming ads Planning camping not too bad First in line I’m glad Best Buy BF deals Puters, tvs camera steals GD here’s my bills Weeks of planning $0 Standing in line for hours $0 GottaDeal…Priceless Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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