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Posted
  braylan1 said:

Shopping Night and Day

Looking For Crazy Awesome Deal

Gotta Be First In Line

:crossfing

nope, still not there. it needs to be 5-7-5. yours is 5-8-6

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Okay, found another counter, and this one is showing different so let's try this and hopefully this will work!

 

Shopping Night and Day

Looking For That Awesome Deal

Will Be First In Line

 

 

:crossfing:crossfing

Edited by braylan1
Posted
  braylan1 said:

Okay, found another counter, and this one is showing different so let's try this and hopefully this will work!

 

Shopping Night and Day

Looking For That Awesome Deal

Will Be First In Line

 

 

:crossfing:crossfing

That one does it

 

;)

 

Some of these are really good...

Posted
  braylan1 said:

Wish this had a like button like FB.:g_thumpsu

thanx, I know haiku's don't have to rhyme but poems that don't just disturb me, they don't seem to flow right so I always try to make it rhyme anyhow.

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